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Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:19:06 am
In response to rhyming fun on a comment thread on Yoav_Ar's Journal on OKC:
"That isn't all you stirred:
the pot
of what a lover
shouldn't ought
to do when breathing
something sweet
into your ear
before you meet.
Oh fickle males!
Come heed my call
and try to tamper down
your gall;
when courting it is most unkind
to proceed with
divided mind.
If you are bent on choosing nary
Please do not then
think to marry.
For when you spread
your lies about,
be sure your sins
will find you out.
And if my message
is unclear:
don't be an asshole, please
my dear."
-- SaneAsIEverWas
Saving for posterity!
Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:26:01 am
Everyone should write poems for you!
Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:46:46 am
re: comment#1
Everyone should write poems for you!
Oh what a fun thought!
Feel free!
And I will reciprocate!
Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:04:32 am
re: comment#1
Everyone should write poems for you!
I have never written a poem for anyone.Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:40:10 am
re: comment#3
I have never written a poem for anyone.
For what reasons then have you written poems?
Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:55:23 am
An Ode to Rhodochrosite
Roses are red,
Cooked beets are purple,
Why aren't there words
to rhyme with that 'purple'?
Pickles are green,
Pie is so yummy,
I'd like some pumpkin
pie in my tummy
Clouds are so fluffy,
I got distracted,
Talking about pie,
That part should be redacted.
Roses are red,
Your name is Rhodo,
The only word coming
to my mind is 'Frodo'
Pickles are green,
But you're not a hobbit,
I think I'll stop here,
Before I make a terrible Lorena/John Bobbitt joke just to make the rhyme with hobbit.
Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:56:13 am
re: comment#4
For what reasons then have you written poems?
School.Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:30:08 am
re: comment#5
An Ode to Rhodochrosite
Roses are red,
Cooked beets are purple,
Why aren't there words
to rhyme with that 'purple'?
Pickles are green,
Pie is so yummy,
I'd like some pumpkin
pie in my tummy
Clouds are so fluffy,
I got distracted,
Talking about pie,
That part should be redacted.
Roses are red,
Your name is Rhodo,
The only word coming
to my mind is 'Frodo'
Pickles are green,
But you're not a hobbit,
I think I'll stop here,
Before I make a terrible Lorena/John Bobbitt joke just to make the rhyme with hobbit.
Nucy is brilliant, cute and witty
Roses are red,
Cooked beets are purple,
Why aren't there words
to rhyme with that 'purple'?
Pickles are green,
Pie is so yummy,
I'd like some pumpkin
pie in my tummy
Clouds are so fluffy,
I got distracted,
Talking about pie,
That part should be redacted.
Roses are red,
Your name is Rhodo,
The only word coming
to my mind is 'Frodo'
Pickles are green,
But you're not a hobbit,
I think I'll stop here,
Before I make a terrible Lorena/John Bobbitt joke just to make the rhyme with hobbit.
her kitty-cat is soft and pretty
I'm sorry she's ill
and I hope she's recovering
so that more joys of living
she can be discovering
she deserves all the pleasures
this planet can offer
and most of the best
don't need a large coffer
her mind it is awesome
her wordplay is cunning
her fierceness amazing
her beauty quite stunning
and not just the body
and not just the mind
but the heart that loves deeply
and is wise and is kind
Thu Jan 12, 2012 1:34:08 am
re: comment#7
Nucy is brilliant, cute and witty
her kitty-cat is soft and pretty
I'm sorry she's ill
and I hope she's recovering
so that more joys of living
she can be discovering
she deserves all the pleasures
this planet can offer
and most of the best
don't need a large coffer
her mind it is awesome
her wordplay is cunning
her fierceness amazing
her beauty quite stunning
and not just the body
and not just the mind
but the heart that loves deeply
and is wise and is kind
wowzers.
her kitty-cat is soft and pretty
I'm sorry she's ill
and I hope she's recovering
so that more joys of living
she can be discovering
she deserves all the pleasures
this planet can offer
and most of the best
don't need a large coffer
her mind it is awesome
her wordplay is cunning
her fierceness amazing
her beauty quite stunning
and not just the body
and not just the mind
but the heart that loves deeply
and is wise and is kind
that's awesome.
Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:25:35 am
re: comment#8
wowzers.
that's awesome.
*blush*
that's awesome.
First draft, too!
Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:26:10 pm
agrees with this post
Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:44:34 pm
under shady trees of green she walks
even when no trees are about
calm and cool and smart she talks
her laughs are energy devout
her eyes are rarely brooding
her smile is a blossom flowered
her peaceful presence, if shaken rudely,
will make brave souls think and cower.
when she moves slowly, she yields not,
moving stones, clearing murky waters;
yet her glowing light may move her quickly.
listening and learning, wise is this earth's daughter.
Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:02:59 pm
re: comment#11
under shady trees of green she walks
even when no trees are about
calm and cool and smart she talks
her laughs are energy devout
her eyes are rarely brooding
her smile is a blossom flowered
her peaceful presence, if shaken rudely,
will make brave souls think and cower.
when she moves slowly, she yields not,
moving stones, clearing murky waters;
yet her glowing light may move her quickly.
listening and learning, wise is this earth's daughter.
Ren this is so lovely. I thank you.
even when no trees are about
calm and cool and smart she talks
her laughs are energy devout
her eyes are rarely brooding
her smile is a blossom flowered
her peaceful presence, if shaken rudely,
will make brave souls think and cower.
when she moves slowly, she yields not,
moving stones, clearing murky waters;
yet her glowing light may move her quickly.
listening and learning, wise is this earth's daughter.
I will allow the Muse to move within me and come back later to do you justice.
Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:41:13 pm
re: comment#12
Ren this is so lovely. I thank you.
I will allow the Muse to move within me and come back later to do you justice.
you are welcome. i'm glad you like it. :)I will allow the Muse to move within me and come back later to do you justice.
