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Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:17:59 pm
by mattwhitbread,
on The Isle of Bute by mattwhitbread
re: comment#7
Thanks for all of the comments. I am new to using a blog to put my writing online and the feedback has been really useful. I will rework some of my new writing based on the comments.
I was experimenting with this piece about Bute, trying to be really sparing and removing unnecessary words, which may have led to it feeling a bit 'jumpy' in time.
I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. It is just the response I was looking for and has been motivational and constructive.
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Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:09:39 am
by mattwhitbread,
on The Isle of Bute by mattwhitbread
re: comment#1
Are you the author of this text?
Written by me after a trip to the Island of Bute (pronounced as in cute) off the West Coast of Scotland. The little ferry leaves from Wemyss Bay, near Port Glasgow, former centre for ship building on The Clyde river.prevnextfirst
